Navigate your Writing ‘Road Bump’ Package
It’s exciting when you start writing your novel. You’ve got all these ideas and you set off on that road at high speed.
At some point, you hit a bump in the road. You’ve gone down a blind alley somewhere and you can’t see how to carry on writing. Is the problem a character issue? A plot issue? A structure issue?
You need help or you’re going to give up writing the novel. But what help is there?
You know there are editors out there, but they can only help if you’ve written a manuscript. If you’re halfway through your novel and stuck, that’s no help.
I understand your frustration and I’ve got a solution.

My Navigate Your Writing ‘Road Bump’ Package helps you figure out the shape of your novel, discuss your characters and improve your plot so you can get over this sticky patch and move on with clarity and confidence.
In a Power Hour online, we’ll make your story stronger, identify what should happen in Chapter One, your midpoint, your climax, and your resolution. We’ll turn your story into a compelling and satisfying outline that directs you in your writing with a clear roadmap.
It’s more than a power hour.
Once we’ve talked and you’ve written your first chapter (up to 5k words), you can send me up to 5k words of your writing for feedback on your style. I’ll let you know where you’re hitting the mark in writing well for your reader, and where you could make changes and improvements.
Any novel has to appeal to the right sort of reader. This package is ideal if you’ve hit a snag in the first or second draft stage of your writing.
Get over that writing Road Bump!
Goal setting
Decide the audience for your book and what you will achieve with your writing
A strong start
Identify the shape of the book and where to start your story
Your questions answered
Help with queries about your writing project and what to focus on next
1:2:1 Power Hour
Video call (1 hr.) to analyse your story and allow you to make progress
Your first chapter
Professional feedback on your writing with guidance for improvements
Commentary
Commentary of up to 5k words to suggest further development
Writing Road Bump Package £167
Book now and get over that road bump!
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Get your novel out into the world!
This high-end value and support can help you get your book out into the world. You don’t have to struggle for years on your own or put off your writing because you don’t know how to start.