There’s a short answer and a long answer. Here’s the short answer: character.
Now here’s the long answer:
Perhaps you’ve spent years on a story and you’re still not finished. You’re still editing. You know it’s still not right, yet you can’t find the work-arounds that will get the manuscript to feel ‘done’. It feels a bit empty, somehow.
I hope this blog has found you before you’ve got that bogged down in it. I hope you’re still early (ish) in the writing process – ideally still on your first draft or beginning to revise it. It’s never too late to fix a story, but all writers want to take the most direct route, yes?
The problem of not being happy with your story is likely to be because you’ve had your focus too much on plot. You’ve probably been spending too much time thinking up new things that could happen to your character and not enough time considering what your character would do about it.
Even more importantly, WHY would your character do that? What’s your character’s goal? What does your character want more than anything? Why is it so important to your character that they achieve it? Why can’t they let it go?
Maybe the first story idea that popped into your head was to do with plot. There’s nothing wrong with that. There’s nothing wrong with asking ‘what if?’ and getting excited about the possibilities of plot that come out of it.
But it is important to move on from that ‘pure’ plot approach and to focus on character. More specifically, focus on character-based plotting.
Character -based plotting
By using a character-based plotting method, you move towards considering the character and what they would do and how they would think and feel in various situations. It doesn’t mean that you forget about plot entirely. There’s a very small readership out there for novels which are all about the depth of a character’s soul but in which nothing happens.
Character-based plotting means that you get to know your character so well that you know what they will do in whatever situation you throw at them in their story. It means that your readers will care about their suffering, their victories, their sacrifices and the strength they have developed by the end of the story.
It’s your characters that your readers really care about. Start there.
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DEANNE ADAMS - STORY COACH AND MENTOR
I care passionately about words and stories. As a Story Coach and Mentor, I help writers to tell irresistible stories. I offer courses, memberships and programmes to suit beginners, developing writers and those ready to become the writer they've been trying to be for years.
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